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love I like the way you look at me
But I hate that you're not ready
I hate it when I feel ignored by you
And when you won't admit its true
I hate it when you lie
Is it because you're shy?
If it is I can help you get thru that
Of course I cant help you if you're not willing to chat
I hate it when you laugh at me
Is it to embarass me, torture me?
Or is it because you're with your friends?
If thats it why don't you just start a trend?
Get everybody to gang up on me
Although I like that we can talk, it makes me happy
I love it when we go out for those long walks
But sometimes I'm scared that you're not listning and I just talk
I hate it when you're nice to me
And then you go ahead and hurt me
And then you tell me that you're sorry
Then I forgive you, so tell me, why do you take advantage of me?
Do you want me to be unhappy?
Can't you understand that I have problems of my own?
So please don't give me anymore to own
This is just a warning for the future
But then again do we have one, I can't be sure
So tell me, do you think there will ever be a we?
I do, but that's just me
you should write one poem about the good things in this relationship. (if there were any). i'll keep checking to see.
great poem .
the good of this poem is that you were so full of feeling and couldn't hold it inside you anymore so you exploded your feelings on paper. This poem is so full of emotion.I love that. Personally, i think that this is a guy that you like, but by your poem isn't good enough for you. When i read this poem it tells me a little about you and alot about this "guy" which seems to be confused in his position. Since you wrote about the bad things and not the good things that means that you are not happy in this realationship. i say try to write a poem about the good things he does and if it really makes you love him afterward then ya you probably should have a future, if not then you know you got to get outta there. *i know heartbreaks hurt like a bitch, but there are other fish in the sea*
your poem 'us' is sort of like the movie 10 things i hate about you but with a twist. i hope the guy yiu like doesn't read this