Strange

Familiar strangers

Estranged family

strangers you know when you walk by

family you despise when you catch their eyes

They say "blood is thicker than water" 

but forget the rest of those wise words

Blood of comrades

is thicker than

the water of the womb

So who are you fighting with

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I used to write poems a lot more but I a still getting used to writing again.  Forgive me if they aren't very good yet

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allets's picture

Okay

Read a lot of posts on postpoems and find your favs - it will help loosen up the quill and ideation flow. Form is in tact, wit aounds, welcome aboard - slc


 

 

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There is a fascination and

There is a fascination and revulsion for things that dwell in the blood.