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        A Ripping Tornado  blows  and rolls



              as  the  colorfull leaves





            fall off the  trees to sneeze  ,



         and scatter   & cover the   ground



squrrels collect & hide  acorns deep into the mound .





      Dark grey  clouds move fastly above the earth

  



       As a warm crescent autumn breeze soothes





          cruises  & cools on    thru    as ,







          Violets and lilys tickle your nose





         as natures storm  peace to seize and ,





         dis appear  into the dust forever more   .





     * Written By October 5, 2005 Thursday 3:00 pm  *

              

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A Land   of     Peace
would be   nice    to
Live and Walk  in   if
you know what i   mean
this poem is Dedicated
to a cool freind of mine
( The Storms Of  Life )

always blow thru we cant
always prevent them but
all we  can     do  is prepare  for them the
only way that we  know
how to . :*) .neat isit
this poem was orignally
Called Poetic Tornado ,

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©6 October 2005 - 6:48am — poetvg
1 March 2007 - 3:19pm — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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Creativity pours from this poem. It's very unique and full of images. I could picture it as I read. Good work.