* Razorblades Covered In Blood *

      Razor blades sitting out on the bath room

    

    sink laying wide open for any one to pick up ,



    A dark shadowly dark figure enters the bathroom



       thru the opening of a 1st floor window  as





        I continue to brush my hair in the mirror



        as the shadowy dark figure creeps nearer ,



          



          I feel the cold blades of steel bracing



      up agaisnt the back of my neck as a few drops



   of blood start to drip down to the sides of my chest



                

      I had given him my best, but never the less for



      i was totally uneasy & steadly crying that night

            

  as  the shadowy dark figure disappears into the distance



  I was steady  shaking, surprised, and shocked  to still



be alive  living in fear hoping that he wont ever come back .







        * Written By GT , June 13, 2005 , 4:00 AM  .



* I am open for suggestions to make this piece better  *

  



yes this piece needs some work , email me if u have any ideas



        

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is actully a scarry
Story called Razor blades and Switch blades
  I wanted to write   something scarry to .
make people think what
would you do if you whe re in this siduation ?
die be killed or fight
back for your life until
help arrives if it ever
does come to help you .

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mpr8888@yahoo.com's picture

the story line is decent, but not in poem form. if so, you need to work on the rhythm and timing. just a thought.


MR