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                     bloody knives tear

                 thru my flesh like nothing



                   tears roll down my face



          with bone crushing news that eat at soul



         as a  black tattoo covers up my weary skin





       as a river of blood, flows pass her western boots .

  

               *  this poem is all mine  *    

                

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about
a vampress that is
stroung to face any
war that she faces .

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©19 April 2005 - 6:02am — poetvg
30 May 2005 - 10:13pm — Bonnie's Dreamscape (not verified)
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I thought it was about cutting. It would make a good cutter poem.. i enjoyed reading

9 May 2005 - 7:24pm — Jacqueline Conaway (not verified)
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I really like this poem...I think it is good...as all of your works are.

16 May 2007 - 4:28am — Colin "Satyr" McNamara (not verified)
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you certainly have a perchant for the mystical... I like it. you may like the stuff in the Epics folder on my page... they border the ideas you present among your own.

cheers and keep up the writing... hopin to see some more new posts.