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* Hunger Part 1 *

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                    He saw me upon one

                   yellow moon lit night



                     he became hooked

                      upon my beauty



          



       he knew that i was the one that he had been



    searching for to quiench his thirst my blood was the

              

  sweet nectar that this curious bee couldn't wait to taste .



        * This poem is all mine written by  Me  *

                    

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I think my readers got
the idea to this poem
I love Vampire storys
sometimes they make the
most intresting poems to
  read for the most curious readers to enjoy

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:58am
©26 March 2005 - 8:09am — poetvg
27 March 2005 - 8:50pm — Jessica Gray (not verified)
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thats pretty good. it seems you have a lot of talent. more then i do and thats okay because some are better then others, but i really did like this piece. thanks for writing me a comment.