* Bloody Red Rose *

        :*(          a bloody red rose         :*(

                   brought out the beauty

                   out of the both of us



            some how things changed the devil

           made his way in & stole  your soul



                  a bitter cold chilling

                    wind blew pass us



                  you felt nuthin i saw a



                 raging fire burning into

                 the sides of  your eyes



                   freezing & seizing us

                     to be speachless



            your feelings disappeared brushing

          you to be powerless & distance from me   ,



      i tried to save you from the raging storm but u



     chose to turned away &  told me to leave you alone



            cause  you let your anger    and



          attitude destory the good side  of you   .



             *  this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

  this poem is about
a relationship that
went to the bad side
and not the good side
because the guy didnt
want to change his bad
  attitude & his anger
he let it get the best
of him & he ended up
losing the girl that
would have went out of
her way to keep him happy but he didnt not
want that happiness with
her & he said he loved
her but he didnt love
he just used and abused
her emotionally then
chased her away with
his terrible anger :*( .

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Excellent poem gail, it is one of your best ones.

be safe, take care and god bless.

Cherisse