I was stripped from
a love that was so untrue
i just knew that he would n't
take that time to see me for the real me
stripped like a scrapper peeling
off flacky pieces of my
dead skin, as i beg him to
stop as the scars sink farther in
his haunting laughs echoing all over the entire room
as my bloody & bruised & broken body expires
right in front of his revengefull eyes .
THIS POEM IS ALL MINE
i think it is disturbing how many women can relate to this.... well done.
Gail, this is an amazingly relatable poem. I really like the line "as my bloody & bruised & broken body expires right in front of his revengefull eyes" I think that is really powerful. I hope that he didn't hurt too badly and that you know you'll be okay soon