* Stripped *

                    I was stripped from

                  a love that was so untrue



               i just knew that he would n't

          take that time to see me for the real me



             stripped like a scrapper peeling

                off  flacky pieces of my

               dead  skin, as i beg him to

            stop as the scars sink farther in



  his haunting laughs echoing all over the entire room



      as my bloody & bruised & broken body expires



         right in front of his revengefull eyes   .



                THIS POEM IS ALL MINE

            

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Nicole .'s picture

i think it is disturbing how many women can relate to this.... well done.

Danielle Wagner's picture

Gail, this is an amazingly relatable poem. I really like the line "as my bloody & bruised & broken body expires right in front of his revengefull eyes" I think that is really powerful. I hope that he didn't hurt too badly and that you know you'll be okay soon