i was resting into a chamber underneath the sea
as the bubbles cool down my skin
as it relaxes my wavy hair ,
as the water sinks into my dress
as my legs turn into colorful fins
i awake and the fishes and dolpins
help to set me free, because i am
now a beautiful creature of the sea .
* I wrote & copy wrote this poem by myself *
a mermaid with a lot of cool freinds .
You created a serene and graceful transformation . . . an enchanting snapshot of a timeless story. Really love’n this! Beautiful work. Patricia
Great rendition there. Almost a song like composition. Well written and keep up the good work!