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             the spirit of the wolves

             I hear them howling into

            the crisp of the moonlight

            and for that i can always

           feel safe and secure at home  .

          

            

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i need advice and
comments on this poem.
tell me what you think
of it ? because i am
all ears on it thanks
peace and happiness .

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©7 July 2004 - 11:44pm — poetvg
9 March 2005 - 5:19am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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I think this is excellent as is because its simple and to the point.Leave as is it's perfect!

9 July 2004 - 4:07pm — tina_lynne
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you have lots of poems...
this was short and to the point...which isn't always good...you need to SHOW us this scene, not tell us... the english language is full of beautiful devices for us to use to bring our words to life...things like metaphors, similies, and adjectives..this is a very good beginning... it's something to go with...but it isn't enought...too much telling, not enough showing...