* Frozen Icecicles *

               the polar ice caps melted

                and covered up the whole

                 world all in one night .

             with frozen ice cicles as sharp

           and pointy as kicken butcher knives

             and if you got hit by one or two

           of them you 'd be destined to lose

          both of your eyes for all of eternity  .

    

        *  this poem is all mine , i wrote it *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ouch this sounds scary
doesnt it yes the end
of the world is near and
i was scared when i had
this dream because it felt like when i woke up
from this dream i thought
it actully happed in real life scary isnt it .

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hey i liked this..short, sweet, and simple. thanks for your critique on mine as well. <3