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* Water Transformation *

             i visit a beautiful place

           where my water transformation

            takes place back into the red

           sea where whales and dolphins and

          swim and roar free and my spiritual

        soul joins the fun and plays games with

       them because that is where i am finally at

      peace for me to return back to the sea from a

     terrible life of pain and misery from this earth .



           * this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about my
life sometimes i feel
like dropping my life
leaving everything behind
and living a free life
back into the open sea
free from all of this
pain and misery walking
away leaving everything
behind swiming into the
sea and never ever looking back because im
miserable here and that is the truth sometimes i
feel like id be better of
f somewhere else other than just stuck here living this merisable  life into the sea or
ocean i could live and swim and play with all
of gods animals all day .

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:58am
©22 May 2004 - 8:12pm — poetvg
25 May 2004 - 1:45am — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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Great title. Interesting poem, concepts, emotions, and twists. It began so happy, cheerful, playful and I was lost in the emotions of being "one" with the sea or ocean. Then, you had my heart breaking with the reason(s) of why you wanted this transformation. Overall this is a powerful, thought out, emotionally impacting poem. Thank you for posting and sharing.