you crushed my broken heart
that fell onto the floor
into a million of little pieces
when you told me that you
didn't love me anymore
you might as well took a
knife and stabbed me into my
heart until you ripped it out
and i layed there bleeding to death.
* this piece is all mine *
So sad and insightful, and yet beautiful at the same time. Really like the poem.
wow...this is so true for what I'm going through right now...I love it...
wow, deep poem that explains the hurt and pain of love.
good writing!
Hey very descriptive, good work on this one! :)