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* At Gun Point *

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                   I work a very tight

                   shift at the bank

                    two angrey men

                   walk into the bank

                  they take me hostage

                  pointing the gun right

                  upon me at all times ,

                  i am in constant fear

                  as scary thoughts run

                  thru my mind will i die

                 today ? or will i survive

                 this dangerous situation

              where's a hero when u need one.?

                  

                  

               * This Story was written By GT *  

                  

                

                  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This story is about a
woman scared and crying
in a hostage sitiuation
at a local bank scary
isnt it having a gun
pointed at you at all
time what would you do
if you where in my shoes?

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©21 December 2003 - 6:14am — poetvg
26 May 2005 - 3:21pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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Man, this sent chills up my spine. Who knows...I'd probably freak out...

10 April 2004 - 10:31pm — Treshi De Lioncourt (not verified)
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Pretty poem. Strong poem. Beautiful poem.
~*~This Is Your Critique From The Child~*~
-Treshi

16 January 2004 - 3:33pm — jerry_joseph_huggins
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Wow! I would have never thought about writing about something like that. You have real creativity! Keep it up! (457)