* Narmada *

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Exotic Love Poems

             babe  i  love all of

             the sweet things that

             you always do for me

              thank god your fina

             lly home i shed a tear

             every time you are by

             my side because i get

             chills up and down my

             spine every- time you

             have to leave me i get

             down onto my knees and

             pray for god to watch

             over you thru out the

             days that you are away

             from me i love you babe .



            * this poem is all mine *

          

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem means tender
feelings for somebody
special that makes
a very big change into
your life isnt that so
very sweet and romantic .

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The Globe's picture

A prayer to the one we love in a very sweet & romantic number. To have someone caring for us and we to him or her are those cherished moments in anyone's life and life would fully be enhanced if only such a feeling is given and returned throughout civilization as opposed to hatred. Good job...

Dragons Of Rose's picture

I think if you would format this with proper line breaks and punctuation this would read really well.