babe i love all of
the sweet things that
you always do for me
thank god your fina
lly home i shed a tear
every time you are by
my side because i get
chills up and down my
spine every- time you
have to leave me i get
down onto my knees and
pray for god to watch
over you thru out the
days that you are away
from me i love you babe .
* this poem is all mine *
A prayer to the one we love in a very sweet & romantic number. To have someone caring for us and we to him or her are those cherished moments in anyone's life and life would fully be enhanced if only such a feeling is given and returned throughout civilization as opposed to hatred. Good job...
I think if you would format this with proper line breaks and punctuation this would read really well.