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* Bloody Death *
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Mystical Creatures & Fairies it was all in your plans to
rid of me for good and
make it look like it was
an accident you took a
knife to me and threw
me on the floor i started
screaming and begging for
mercy u drove the knife
deep into my soul to
watch me die right in
front of you.all of my blood
pouring out of my body
like an endless river .
i took my last breath pure
misery in my head i was
dead and my niece saw
how you murdered me .
* this poem is all mine *
this is amazing i love it! thanks for commenting on my poetry.
Good work... I like it
i have a few suggestions that could be used for most of your pieces. you might want to work more on your line breaks, if you get those going more smoothly, you will create a rhythem- this can be even more effective than rhyming. if u can add rhythem and rhyme effectively you will have much higher quality work.
just some tips.
~Claire