* I Remember You *

                i remember the

                way you used to

                kiss me and wipe

               all my tears away

               when i was down and

              about, i remember you

              telling me your feelings

             would never ever change

          no matter what happened to us,  

          sometimes i miss those days because

           they fade away in the rain  

           because when i was in your arms

             you made me to be  strong .

           to carry on to the nexted degree.



           *  this poem was written by me  *

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Jay McWilliams's picture

Deep... real deep. This one really hit home. Much Luv, Jay.

Denise Morales's picture

dear gial
i have read your poem i remember you i like this poem its one the best poems that i read i like writing poems that i can relate to and yours poems i can relate to.I wrote a poem called forever and i think you would like it and i think your writing is amazing.youll be alright

love always denise morales

Katie Moak's picture

so sad and sweet. its really good and it flows nicely

jess's picture

it is really cool and i think it helps people out

Marie Dauphin's picture

i love this one.......im actually goin through that right now

Jennifer Perez's picture

It's a really good poem. I love it and can really relate to it. Great work !

Zach Jacobsen's picture

It's deep....and I can understand it! YAY! Wonderfulness! On to poem #5

almouallem's picture

Do you remember?

The page before the end
In the 20th notebook
You will read
My lover
that I passed twenty
And still sincere
And for ever
Do you remember?
The days the hours the minutes
The days we were like the butterflies
flying over all the gardens
We were running against the time
But it passed like a plink of an eye
do you remember?
How much they tried to break all what we like
My Love
My heart
And they did not stop
Even my dreams
They tried to smash it
The dream you were dreaming: a small hut
and a piece of bread enough for two
Do you remember?
What you were saying
We wish we had wings
To fly
Fly away
Where no one lives
To an island
That I was dreaming to live in
Where no human no Satan
But the both of us
And the lovely birds
Do you remember?
I told you the time has an end
And love has an end
But my love has no end
It starts
Between your lips
When you smile
Do you remember
what I use to tell you
That the moon to me
Is the best of them all
And the grapes
Is the best fruit?
And you use to Lough
I laughed too
And you know what I mean

I know what you mean
Do you remember?
When I use to date you with no watch in my wrest
To tell the time
Why don't you stop?
And like you are telling the seconds
Why don't you stop?
Do you remember?
How many times I use to die on your chest
Your breast
And I never left you alone
Oh my lover
How much I loved to sew to you bond
From the stars
I use to be jealous
From the air when it blow your hair
From my heart when use to beat your love
From my lips when touches your lips
From my eyes when looking at you
From my tongue
When saying your name
And saying I LOVE YOU …

I LOVE YOU ---- I LOVE YOU ---- I LOVE YOU

© BILL AL MOUALLEM