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* Kissing Under The Mistletoe *

                  before we got up to my

                  parents front door my

                  sweetie gazed over at

                 me and for that sweet moment

                  thank god i applyed the chap

                  stick before we kissed

                  dry crusty lips would have

                 ruined the bliss between us .

                  

                  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this poem becaus
e it was a nice touch  since it is all most
christmas time is here
kissing the person you
love is so romantic and
sweet it is so wonderful

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©29 November 2003 - 4:26am — poetvg
15 February 2004 - 3:09am — pkpbc1950
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Oh how funny! A comical sight to see dry crusty lips sticking together....especially under the miseltoe! Great job on this one Gail! You made me chuckle!

:)Tricia

6 May 2005 - 9:33am — Richard Elliott (not verified)
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Nice work. You have avried style but a seemingly innate rhythm and rhyme.

Cheers!

Richard.E.

1 December 2003 - 9:16pm — Arjun Gurudev (not verified)
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Just a very thoughtful line, huh?