I never thought i
would spend the rest
of my life all alone .
these feelings never
leave me for they will
never ever change until
the very day i die it
will stay fresh in my mind
until the very end of time,
and all of my tears fall down
my face like endless rain drops.
babe life should not be so cruel.
* this poem is all mine *
this ones very good
Such great sadness expressed. It obviously comes from the very depths of your soul. Loneliness is an emotion that leaves the psyche in an influx of emotions. For those who have never experienced this, it can not be understood. For those who have, there is compassion for the lonely all over the world.
I reach my compassion today to you.
Amy
Gentle is the night♥
This is very sad, and you express it well.
There awaits sunshine around every dismal corner, just waiting to be greeted!
Keep up the great work!
Michelle
A very nice poem dear Gail. I think it can speak for many of us who do indeed fell alone. In fact, we are never by ourselves as God is with the believing and non-believing. Your poem speaks from the heart, and that what makes it worth more than gold. A writer's greatest weapon is not the sword but the pen. Keep on fighting against the cruelties of the world with words stemming from your soul.
this is why growing up sucks... :-(
Great poem. At times, I can relate.
this is a good poem becuase its the kind of poem that makes u look back at your life and think.