* Mermaid*

                There was a beautiful mermaid

                in the lonely dark blue sea .

                she was hoping and praying for

                her land prince to come to the  

                sea and steal her heart and to

                look at her they would fall in

                love and then he  would take her far

                away then she would become human .

                and she would no longer be a fish

                of the sea she would leave her family

                and freinds behind she would forfill

                all of his every needs. no longer of the

                sea she was willing to give it all up.

                to be with her prince even if she didnt

                have that much of a speaking voice it

                would be her choice in the later end .

                ive dreamed of myself as a mermaid it

                is lovely but it isnt all what it is all

                cracked up to be.thank god im not ariel ,

                who actully knows how long would it take

                for me actully to find my land prince ?

                probaly several years and the truth is

                about me is i know i would be a pretty

                mermaid with long black wavy hair with

                colorful seashells at each and every side

                my deep brown beautiful round eyes and

                my green scaly fins run down to my tail

                it was so amazing of me touching all of

                those cool sandy beaches .as the wind

                blows in my hair as i sit there on the

                dark rocks dreaming of my land prince .

                thank god i was only a dream i can wake

                up now and laugh about it sooner or later.





               *  this poem is all mine *

                

Author's Notes/Comments: 

my comments about this
poem is have you ever had
dreams about being a princess or a mermaid ?
it is amazing having dreams about that but being in some elses life when you find it is not as easy to fill their shoes either , i feel so
happy being me thats all nothing more when i smile
it is a speacil moment i
will never ever forget
for the rest of my life.

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Dale Clark's picture

This is such a lovely dream.
It brought a smile to my face.
A joy! ;)
~Dale

Laura Bennett's picture

I really like this, i love the use of mythical creatures in poems, it gives a surreal, magical feel. The contrast between the magic of the dream and the reality that we should be happy with what we have is great! keep writing! Laura : )

pudnsis1's picture

Gail,
Great imagery, wild simili :). I have always beieved in mermaids and sirens, but I would not fullfill the category of either. Love will surprise when you least expect, so chill and enjoy, Love peace and freedom, Linda

gentle's picture

There is nothing more beautiful than the dream of being a character in a fairy tale. Dreaming is priviledge, we as God's own certainy share.

Amy


Gentle is the night♥