* Hawaii Pineapple Ham Pizza *

             i cant deny my body this

             taste of hawaii pineapple

             pizza it is like a desire one of

             my freinds introduced me the

             taste of this hot wonderful

             pizza. i will never ever forget

             the day my freind and me enjoyed

             it and we had so much fun it was

             so great to have fun with my freinds

             they are such sweet caring people true

             and cool way down to the soul take care

          my freinds you are all truly one in a million

             to me and you always will be to me forever.

            

            * this piece is all mine written by me *    

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Winter Tamakloe's picture

Don't cha just love pizza! LOL. This really caught my eye... I enjoyed it!

stustaub's picture

Well, I WAS on a diet.

Excellent poem. The calories are now mounting.

Patricia Jones's picture

I find it rather irresistible myself; I believe it was the company that made the food and memories so delightful. Very clever of you to tie the two together. Enjoyable work, my friend! Patricia

Alejandra Roman's picture

heehee >) yummy! i was introduced to it by a friend too! i just had sum todayso when i read the title to your poem i burst out laughing! do you enjoy coffee ice cream too?! haha luvs!

Sarah Hale's picture

Hey Sweetie,
I loooove Pineapple Pizza it is so very wonderful.
I get my inspiration by getting critiqued, and I just wanted to thank you very much for looking over my work. I'm 17 years old and in the near future I have plans to go to college and minor in journalism so I can publish all that I can. I hope I am an inspiration to you as well as you are to me. I recently wrote a poem called "Teenage Emotion", I would love if you went and looked at it. Thank You. Good luck in all that you do and keep writing. Sarah

ugonna's picture

Your use of the metaphor
is revealing and simple
in its lighted way...

Ugonna