i cant deny my body this
taste of hawaii pineapple
pizza it is like a desire one of
my freinds introduced me the
taste of this hot wonderful
pizza. i will never ever forget
the day my freind and me enjoyed
it and we had so much fun it was
so great to have fun with my freinds
they are such sweet caring people true
and cool way down to the soul take care
my freinds you are all truly one in a million
to me and you always will be to me forever.
* this piece is all mine written by me *
Don't cha just love pizza! LOL. This really caught my eye... I enjoyed it!
Well, I WAS on a diet.
Excellent poem. The calories are now mounting.
I find it rather irresistible myself; I believe it was the company that made the food and memories so delightful. Very clever of you to tie the two together. Enjoyable work, my friend! Patricia
heehee >) yummy! i was introduced to it by a friend too! i just had sum todayso when i read the title to your poem i burst out laughing! do you enjoy coffee ice cream too?! haha luvs!
Hey Sweetie,
I loooove Pineapple Pizza it is so very wonderful.
I get my inspiration by getting critiqued, and I just wanted to thank you very much for looking over my work. I'm 17 years old and in the near future I have plans to go to college and minor in journalism so I can publish all that I can. I hope I am an inspiration to you as well as you are to me. I recently wrote a poem called "Teenage Emotion", I would love if you went and looked at it. Thank You. Good luck in all that you do and keep writing. Sarah
Your use of the metaphor
is revealing and simple
in its lighted way...
Ugonna