Song * Without You *

           without you in my life,

          i feel like im so completely

          very empty. im into millions

          of little pieces, i cant think,

          i  miss your sweet voice i used

        to hear in my ears, i miss your sweet smile



           i can't get over you without hitting

           the floors, and my tears rolling down

          off of my face like endless raindrops ,

          i never ever thought you would ever

          leave me the way you did. but i was wroung.

          you lefted me without saying a word .

          



2nd         babe why did you leave me and hurt me

verse         i never thought you would ever

              do me wrong but i guess i was wrong

              how am i supposed to get over you

              i don't know what to do with out you.



chrous     i can't get over you without hitting the

            floors as all the tears rolling down

            off of my face like endless raindrops

            i never thought you would do me wrong

            you lefted me without even saying a word.





3rd

verse        i guess i will just have to except

             to the fact you are not ever coming

             back to me i guess i will just have

             to get over you it will take some time

             no more crying over you it is so true .





              dry my tears now babe im moving on with

              out you im no longer blue because of you.



           * Written By GT , May 10. 2004 , 1:30pm  *

            

Author's Notes/Comments: 

there are some depressing
ways about love we all go
through them when we make
little mistakes that hurt
the loves of our lifes they dont answer our calls, tear up our letters but there is a
healing point to a broken
heart if a broken heart
is too hard too repair
then the love of our life
moves on and never ever sees you again .that is
just the way life is it
isnt all a bed of roses
in all relationships there are a few thorns that can cut and sink in
  real deep when u at least expect it u agree
Melvin 2? HEE HEE YEP:*)

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blumentopf's picture

Beautiful poem Gail, I can deeply emphasize- to get over a deep attachment is often terrible. But sometimes it is necessary.
Thanks for sharing. I see you have many religious poems.
Have to get back some times as my time permits.

Love and peace
Elizabeth


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thickynezz's picture

I love reading songs that people thats not in the popular world write. I like to sing to them. I like this poem as well as a few others you wrote that Ive seen. I will still view on. Read one of my poem. The best one I like is I'm So in.... and let me know what you think about it. It was intended really to be a song but it sounds better jsut sai in a poetic way on a stage at the coffee shop lol.

Sadiq Ali's picture

thats beautiful!
i love ure poems
still got more 2 read
keep writing :)
x

Yulysma Chavez's picture

Hello,
I really enjoyed this one, you have so many creative works of art. Thank YOu for looking over my work, I really appreciate it. Keep up the good work! ...SMILES!:):)

lillep's picture

this one is definately one topic i know of. thanx for the share. good work


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