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* Fountain Of Love *

                Your gorgeous brown eyes

                your soft skin like silk.

                dark long wavy hair and

                its beautiful to touch .

                 to see strong stomach

                 muscles the body of a

                 greek god.your cherry lips

                 i cant deny i want all

                 of your tasty kisses,

                 strong warm caring arms.

                  you know i cant get  

                  enough of you are my

                  fountain of true love .

                

        *  This poem was origally written by me *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem because
im so much in love with
a sweetie hes closet to
my heart.i never ever
want to part from him ever.hes my number one
and he always will be.
i want to live the rest
of my life with him grow
old with him its true some day in the future .
peace love and happiness.
if u read this sweetie.
i love u and i always will until the very end .
of time ciao hugs and kisses . cute eyes .
u always be my Spanish
prince always :*).

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©20 June 2002 - 11:51am — poetvg
9 March 2007 - 9:00am — heavensunrise
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Thanks for your comments, we share our God's principles, and you 've got heaps of poems, very smart

Freddy

2 March 2005 - 10:07pm — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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hi thanks for critiquing my piece You are the most wonderful man in the world, and this piece of yours could describe my John but make it short hair and straight not curly hahaha . Great minds work well together ! Gotta love those dark haired guys!

8 May 2004 - 2:28am — Ladessa Sullivan (not verified)
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This is just so sweet. So far everthing of yours I've read so far are just so full of light and grace. Just lovely and positive.

18 January 2004 - 2:16am — Zach Jacobsen (not verified)
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Hello again. Wow....very great. ^^ I like descriptive writing. Good job. Now to poem #3

5 November 2003 - 5:05pm — Patricia Jones (not verified)
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He must indeed be a wondrous person to inspire such beauty. Luciously romantic work. Patricia

14 June 2003 - 11:42pm — humanpulse
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Here, indeed, you are a painter. You have drawn features, motion and feelings. Colorful fountain.

10 June 2003 - 6:15am — kiwi
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This is a wonderful expression of love.I hope he appreciates your devotion.

Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.

28 May 2003 - 9:40pm — Unknown Poet (not verified)
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Great use of imagery.
This man is obviously lucky to have you because you write such beautiful poetry about him.

10 February 2004 - 10:53pm — Gail Little (not verified)
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Very nice indeed. A right sexy piece. I can feel the love bleeding off the page.

15 April 2003 - 1:07pm — Judy Costea (not verified)
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Gail,
How romantic your words for your love of your heart.. He is truely blessed to have you.. Your poetry is so inspiring for others...beautiful Poem..
Peace and Love
Judy

9 March 2003 - 7:29am — Desiree Dufresne (not verified)
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sexy ;-)
you write really well.

3 March 2003 - 6:57am — journey_through_life
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Great poem. the image and feelings are very clear. Good writing. ~Jan

25 January 2003 - 5:33pm — Grace Terry (not verified)
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WOW! How powerful this is. Even I could feel your passion. I really like how you make things tangible and etheric at the same time. Thank you for sharing these feelings!

24 January 2003 - 5:06am — Angelo Ungro (not verified)
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love is found so rarely....but when found it is more precious than a perfect rubie and inspires some beautiful poetry..great emotion and expression

22 January 2003 - 6:57pm — chris
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Hi,
Great poem. I loved the clear emotion, you had in this.
Keep writing.

9 July 2002 - 9:27pm — ugonna
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Indeed, it is love that
makes us humane enough
to be called human!

A touching and glarring
piece, Gail!!

Ugonna