a rose

the rose blooms in the spring

like a girl in high school

a rose withers away in the girls heart

the girl wants to die

the rose wants to live

with the mothers help

the girl will live

like the rose in the spring

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Afzal Shauq's picture

good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?