Yeah, ok

Surrounded, but nothing near
Speech, only silence appears 
 
Sitting, but all alone
Friends, with hearts of stone
 
 
Smiling, but nothing real
Only pain, is what I feel
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Great Title - Yeah, OK

followed by couplets: about lonliness. Write more to get the creative juices flowing, you have the whole world, your world to choose from - the entire range of emotions - ecstatic to blue - I really Liked the title. ~~A~~