Lost In Your Blue Ocean Eyes

I can only dream of the day,

I see your sweet face,

and stare into,

your blue ocean eyes.

I want to get lost in them,

swim in your love,

and never be found.

Just a glance,

makes my heart skip a beat.

You take my breath away,

so take me away.

I want to get lost forever,

in your blue ocean eyes.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 1-5-04. I actually like this poem.

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Datong Liu's picture

I think "you take my breath away" is a little to cliche for this poem... Your poems are too original to stoop down to using love poem cliches...

-tom

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spark's picture

this is beautiful, good job!

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