I can only dream of the day,
I see your sweet face,
and stare into,
your blue ocean eyes.
I want to get lost in them,
swim in your love,
and never be found.
Just a glance,
makes my heart skip a beat.
You take my breath away,
so take me away.
I want to get lost forever,
in your blue ocean eyes.
~*~ Jill ~*~
I think "you take my breath away" is a little to cliche for this poem... Your poems are too original to stoop down to using love poem cliches...
-tom
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this is beautiful, good job!
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