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August 2002 Poetry

Hand in hand we walk.

Talking about anything that comes to mind.

Finding even more reasons we love each other.

Another day spent together.

Forever on our minds.

Kindly and gently you kiss me.

See what we share?

Bare was the sky.

High, the clouds drift in.

Happening to soak us in rain, but I say,

hey, kiss me again and let it rain.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 8-9-02. This poem is kinda weird cause the last word of each sentence rhymes with the first word of the next.

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©15 August 2002 - 5:38am — hccgirl04
29 November 2005 - 7:28pm — poetvg
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wonderfull
gald u wrote it

24 September 2003 - 4:06pm — Kristal Mower (not verified)
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Hey cool! I really like that last line.
Kris
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Kitty
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10 June 2003 - 7:53pm — Flavia Vela (not verified)
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hi..
ur rhyming scheme.. is sweet... what a brilliant idea
and i love the last line
its so romantic...
and i love the rain... so naturally i would love this poem

excellente chiquita (excellent girl)
ciao
Flavia