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Improv 2002

Hold me in your arms,

I want you.

Kiss me tenderly,

I want you.

Feel my heartbeat on your chest,

I want you.

Touch me with your gentle hands,

I want you.

Whisper words so sweet to hear,

I want you.

Feel the warmth of my breath on your neck?

I want you.

My body aches for only you.

I want you.

Take me away.

I want you.

I need you.

I love you.

Take me as I am,

I’m yours.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 7-19-02. It's my 181st improv. :-D

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©23 July 2002 - 7:48am — hccgirl04
29 April 2004 - 12:53am — chris
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HI
I really liked it. I liked the words, and the emotions, they conveyed. I loved the way it flowed, so smooth, and easy. It was great. Thanks for sharing it with us, and keep writing