I used to sing in the shower,
now, I just cry.
I used to walk in the park,
now, I just cry.
I used to talk to friends,
now, I just cry.
I used to have fun,
now, I just cry.
I used to sleep,
now, I just cry.
I used to express my feelings,
now, I just cry.
And this smile you see,
just hides the tears,
of the real me,
when you’re around.
But as soon as you leave,
I just cry.
Cry, cry, cry.
I just cry.
~*~ Jill ~*~
hey jill,
look im critiquing your poetry. Is this a poem you got out of nowhere?or is real? I used to is very good poemege!