I Used To

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April 2002 Poetry

I used to sing in the shower,

now, I just cry.

I used to walk in the park,

now, I just cry.

I used to talk to friends,

now, I just cry.

I used to have fun,

now, I just cry.

I used to sleep,

now, I just cry.

I used to express my feelings,

now, I just cry.

And this smile you see,

just hides the tears,

of the real me,

when you’re around.

But as soon as you leave,

I just cry.

Cry, cry, cry.

I just cry.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 4-11-02.

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Sandra Davis's picture

hey jill,
look im critiquing your poetry. Is this a poem you got out of nowhere?or is real? I used to is very good poemege!