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Two Become One
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Improv 2001 Hold me close,
let two become one.
I want to feel what you feel.
Hearts beating together,
thoughts only of each other.
The warmth of our love,
wraps us tight,
as two,
became one.
~*~ Jill ~*~
WORTH THE READING
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It's a good poem based upon structure and content. However, I have feeling that you're leaving a lot out. It's as though you're afraid to expose what you're fully thinking, feeling, and wanting. Even if you don't want to put it all on the line for the public to read, think about what you want, who you want, why you want, etc. It'll give you a better perception and understanding of yourself.