You Said

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2000 Poetry

Not a single word spoken,

only tears falling down,

as I slide the blade round,

and I fall to the ground.

~

You said you really loved me,

I thought you really cared,

as you ran your fingers through my hair,

and you would always be there.

~

But I was wrong, very wrong,

you were never there as I cried,

you filled my life with bitterness and lies,

and now I'm saying my last good byes.

~

I see the blood rushing,

and the tears falling down,

as I slide the blade round,

and I fall to the ground.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 10-17-00. It's one of my first poems. Writing during a very depressing time in my life.. lol

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James Boothe's picture

Ouch....painful and depressing, but I guess that was the point. lol. Another really good one.