I Miss You

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2001 Poetry

We've only known each other,

for a short time now,

and I want to tell you how I feel,

but I'm not quite sure how.

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I want to tell you how I wish,

for you to hold me tight,

wrap me in your love,

and make everything alright.

~

I want to tell you how I wish,

I could taste your soft sweet lips,

whisper in your ear,

and kiss your finger tips.

~

I want to tell you how I wish,

we could sit under the stars above,

and that I could finally tell you,

how much I'm falling in love.

~

I want to tell you how I wish,

that I could be with you,

And how I wish these feelings,

were felt within you too.

~

Right now I have the opportunity,

to say what I'd like to say.

But I'm too shy so I'll have to wait.

Tomorrow is another day.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 8-2-01. This was written for a guy named Ron who I was with at the time.

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ree's picture

i llllooovveee this poem!!! i feel like im the one who was talking in here cuz im like that....i usually keep my feelings hidden and unsaid!!!keep it up!!

Deborah Russell's picture

This is a nice poem, beautifully expressed.

cevance's picture

I think this poem does a really good job of catching a viewer's attention. I mean, as I was reading this poem I felt as if you were talking to me. I think you've done an excellent job painting a picture of how you felt, while writing. This is a really great poem and I really enjoyed it!