The sun is going down velvety skies makes you sit in AAAhhhhh!! as you watch the scarlet sunset.
Author's Notes/Comments:
sometime when the sunset is deep in color likr that it makes you wonder if it is hapening...( the end of the world).....is it time...(hapening now) so deep in color looks like wine...( the end of the world)
19 April 2004 - 7:21am — Shell Trees (not verified)
Loved your golden poem i wonder about these things sometimes and look above to the skies it is a good finish to say ah ah the positive instead thanks shell trees...
20 April 2004 - 7:00pm — Sarah Valentine (not verified)
this is a nice poem with good imagery, but it would be so much better if you spelled "hapening" correctly. it is spelled H-A-P-P-E-N-I-N-G, with TWO p's.
Loved your golden poem i wonder about these things sometimes and look above to the skies it is a good finish to say ah ah the positive instead thanks shell trees...
this is a nice poem with good imagery, but it would be so much better if you spelled "hapening" correctly. it is spelled H-A-P-P-E-N-I-N-G, with TWO p's.