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Broken Promises

I will be there for you.

Will take the kids to the zoo.

See you need some shoes.

I should have known not to belive you.

You showed no time for us,

All you did was fuss.

Everything for your self was a must.

Treating us like dust, Brushing us off.

It's ashame it was so hard for me to see.

Wishing we could be.

I was in up to my knees.

Can't belive it took me so long to see......

You were full of broken promises.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

when you are in love you are totaly blind. wake up my sisters, wake up and take the blind fold off

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:34am
©30 November 2003 - 6:30pm — poetjewnita
3 April 2004 - 7:18pm — poetvg
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awesome work
on this poem

3 December 2003 - 4:12pm — Corey Fox (not verified)
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a heartfelt bunch of moments!

one love Corey & co

2 December 2003 - 7:23pm — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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I've lived through this, only I was one of the children. I couldn't agree with you more about womenn opening their eyes. I wish they wouldn't feel inferior or scared to do something about it. They deserve a lot better and maybe after reading this they will get what they need to get out because he destroys the children with her.