1 December 2003 - 9:57pm — Joe Ferguson (not verified)
A very interesting poem. A reversal of the old addage that women get into relationships hoping for the man to change and Men get into relationships hoping the woman never does. Sometimes things change. Unfortunately they change in bad circumstances more often than not. This is a very complex poem at least it deals with very complex problems. The form however is very simple. I enjoyed this one. Good job.
nice i like!
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A very interesting poem. A reversal of the old addage that women get into relationships hoping for the man to change and Men get into relationships hoping the woman never does. Sometimes things change. Unfortunately they change in bad circumstances more often than not. This is a very complex poem at least it deals with very complex problems. The form however is very simple. I enjoyed this one. Good job.