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B (that L months later)

As the hart panteth after the water so panteth my soul after you

I’m just breathless

At the thought of you I stop eating breakfast

My mind avoids you to the point of neglection

I sweep under the carpet my affection

B I love you but I fear rejection

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Somebody in my life just had to open up a part of me which had feelings for soemeone in particular tht I'd brushed to one side for a while - stopped talking to them because I felt they see me as a friend more than anything. This is the result of having to face the feeling albeit briefly

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:27am
©13 June 2005 - 7:47am — poetic7
28 June 2005 - 9:23pm — bonni parker (not verified)
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This piece really sums up the feelings that I get from reading "B".