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Time Is A Thief
Time is the thief that has taken from me
My innocence, and all that life used to be
Tomorrow I may lose what I am today
The hours and minutes erode me away
Each new day, replaces a part of me
With someone different, an adult with responsibility
Can't stop me from changing,
I'm being damaged and repaired
Over and over again.
Next year, same face, same name
New person.
The only thing that doesn't change
Is my desire to keep things the same...
Time is a thief.
I realy enjoyed reading this it is a great poem one, its imagry fills the mind of the reader and the words are well put together
really enjoyed this one =)
(got some new poems by the was wondering what a think of em =))
very clever, a simple idea, but you have put it through very effectivly! u r a genious (i am nt accordin to my spellin lol)
Hi Terry, this is a great poem and who would not feel like being robbed of time?!
My personal opinion is that I feel pity for the interruption in the middle of the poem which started with a wonderful flow and rhyme.
Anyway, a good write!
Kind regards
Ursula
I really enjoyed this poiem i think its fantastic I especially enjoyed the ending this leaves the reader not only hinking but smiling if in the right mood.
Thanks yet again
maxi
(I would appreciate it if you could possibly suggest some of your poems for me to read as I although enjoy your poetry am too lazy to read through them all (:-P) stay happy)