3 April 2006 - 2:44pm — Laura Minns (not verified)
lol i can promise you never looked that way though cup, n u defintly dnt look that way anymore u slim chick lol. its very clever, gd use of pathetic falacy :) x the ginger x
27 November 2005 - 4:50pm — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
No one's ever truly happy with how they look. There's something that we would all change about ourselves. Yet, we look how God wants us to. Why isn't that enough?
30 November 2005 - 3:06pm — Stephanie Cox (not verified)
This is absolutely brilliant, easily my favourite. It was great. Love the way it was written. Like it rhymes but it isn't immediately clear where the rhyme is. It's fantastic.
And as your sister I can say you're not that bad.
lol i can promise you never looked that way though cup, n u defintly dnt look that way anymore u slim chick lol. its very clever, gd use of pathetic falacy :) x the ginger x
this poem describes what i've been going through lately but then i realised it was stupid and people should just like me the way i am.
Excellent poem, I can relate.
No one's ever truly happy with how they look. There's something that we would all change about ourselves. Yet, we look how God wants us to. Why isn't that enough?
This is absolutely brilliant, easily my favourite. It was great. Love the way it was written. Like it rhymes but it isn't immediately clear where the rhyme is. It's fantastic.
And as your sister I can say you're not that bad.