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My Heart Melts

Why can't you hear these cries of pain?

They're deafening to me

Can't you see the girl inside me

Struggling to be free?

You slay me everytime you smile

My heart melts as you laugh

It kills me to see you so carefree

With all the tears I have.




Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ah young love, eh?

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:27am
©21 June 2005 - 11:39am — poeterri
30 June 2005 - 8:44pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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I feel your pain...

22 June 2005 - 12:35am — Stephanie Taylor (not verified)
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I like this because it's so deep. Some people are alone even when they have someone.
Steph Taylor

21 June 2005 - 6:06pm — Toni ------ (not verified)
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hey, is this how you feel about you know who? coz its worded perfectly

21 June 2005 - 11:56am — Emmy Louch (not verified)
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Awww, I really like this! Reminds me of something I would write, I can relate to this. <3

30 November 2005 - 3:43pm — Laura Minns (not verified)
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c'est fantastique!!! J'adore la poem!! hehe. great poem and i c y its like my poem, woteva its name is lol. but seriously its really great! and young love sucks--sumtimes, but other times its the best thing in the whole world :) xXx