Admitting Defeat

The doctor took an x-ray and he found my heart was broken

I knew he saw my misery before I’d even spoken,

He based his diagnosis on the residue on my cheeks

The staining from the tears that have been building up for weeks

He wrote out a prescription, but the cure’s not in a pill,

I’d had them all before and I knew I was not ill,

But now I’ve hit rock bottom and I don’t know what to do,

I can’t have the cure I need because I can’t have you

And though I had denied it a thousand times the prior,

I can’t ignore it anymore, my situation’s dire,

I cant resist this drug i have and now it needs to go,

Must take control of my own health and my own feelings so,

Lets say goodbye, admit defeat, and bow out of this game

You’ve been free of me so long now, so let me be the same

Terri

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Whisper .'s picture

A very good poem on comming to tearms with relationships I enjoyed this emensly (please pardon my spelling) I especially liked the idea of a doctors diognosis for the heartbreak
please keep writing your easy reading and emotion provoking poems

laura + laura's picture

HI terri, i love this poem YAY! Laura F sed u no lots of big words u crazy peice of poo! I dont no wot she's on! But i think that ur just a bit 2 brainy, and i dont think ur a crazy piece of poo, crazy but certaintly not POO! from LAURA + LAURA