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An Ocean
You only ever leave my thoughts for a moment,
And like a tide you never fail to return again.
Your depths are like those of an ocean,
I can only dive so far.
Like sinking ships, those around you
Are pulled in with no mercy
Can not come up, will not come up
Left drowning for eternity
Like a sea, you have so many secrets
All waiting to be found,
And once I've swam in the blue of your eyes
I will never seek out ground,
When anger boils inside you, it crashes like the waves,
That's why you are an ocean
And like a sea behave
You are quite the romantic. You write of love in an endearing ways. It's refreshing to read positive things about love instead of just heartache. God bless you.
hmm, it does sort of remind of my ocean waves thing. i like this one a lot coz the language is flowing and deep, like the ocean itself ^_^
I wish i could do what u do it is totally amazing, brilliant use of the sea to describe someone- but plz put in some more diary entries :) x
AWESOME!!
This is an amazing poem. It reminds me of how I feel about my boyfriend at times. Was it written with someone special in mind?
well done, i love the way you've included all the charactoristics of the ocean and the sea and not focused on one and also you called the poem ocean and not actually be about the ovean, really good!