There's a voice inside my head
And It's telling me to cry
To let me conquer all I feel
And let me wonder why
It's telling me to be myself
And not delay my tears
It's telling me to let it go
And speak aloud my fears
From the front, I'm just a little
Clueless happy girl
When, just like adults I can sometimes
Detest this dreadful world.
I live for me, I should smile
And concentrate on me
Until I grow and live to care
For my own family
Terri,
Well writen.
Knowledgeable,learned and wise.
Your parents(Mother) should be proud of you.
Thanks for sharing.
Danniel
I absolutely love this poem, extremely well written.
The most important line in this piece is the one that says to be yourself,yes always your genuine self no matter what but in the end you have to answer to yourself for any and all you do in life...Great write Also never be afraid to cry for that is the time beyond smiling that shows the passion in your heart
Great job, keep up the good work
wow that was so good, it makes me wonder, but its so true what youre mom tells you
thats really good and true!
Terri, this is one of the best poems you've written and I've read. I hope to some day to see this published.
This is a great poem. I also really like the message your mother had for you, I wish my parents had told me things like that when I was younger.
its gd, and yer we shud defintly make the most of not been an adult yet- adults suck!!! they suck,suck suck suck!great poem. its so unfair that u r so totally awesome. luv ya xXx