Your words are like lyrics
Your voice is a song
Your mind is a puzzle
Where did I go wrong?
Your heart is a magnet
But you repell me away
Our love is so strong
But it's starting to decay
You can be so touchy
As delicate as a child
I can't say two words
Or you will go wild
Your words are like lyrics
Your voice is a song
I want you no more
Goodbye and so long
realy like this one
its very emotion based which is always a good thing
the use of rhymes doesnt take over euither it seems that it came naturally and that you wasnt just struggling to make words rhyme, well done :)
i seriously love this piece! it is really amazing, i mean i do like poetry in small doses but nt many do i think are absolutly fantasique! the way it sounds and the words are just brilliant! congrads terri! this is just my cuppa tea (in the mug!!) x me x
this is such a good poem terri.
Very Powerful Piece!!!!!
Keep writing,you are very talented.
Danniel
WOW! what a lovely poem i really enjoyed reading this it's brightened up my day thank you for writing this its BEAUTIFUL!
This is one of my favorite poems by you. The lines sing themselves and I see you singing this into a microphone on a stage upon your stool strumming a guitar. Great, great piece. I felt myself standing there the whole time and when your time was up I could feel myself applauding you.