Your Words Are Like Lyrics

Your words are like lyrics

Your voice is a song

Your mind is a puzzle

Where did I go wrong?

Your heart is a magnet

But you repell me away

Our love is so strong

But it's starting to decay

You can be so touchy

As delicate as a child

I can't say two words

Or you will go wild

Your words are like lyrics

Your voice is a song

I want you no more

Goodbye and so long

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Michael Heslington's picture

realy like this one
its very emotion based which is always a good thing
the use of rhymes doesnt take over euither it seems that it came naturally and that you wasnt just struggling to make words rhyme, well done :)

Laura Minns's picture

i seriously love this piece! it is really amazing, i mean i do like poetry in small doses but nt many do i think are absolutly fantasique! the way it sounds and the words are just brilliant! congrads terri! this is just my cuppa tea (in the mug!!) x me x

Corey Ramsay's picture

this is such a good poem terri.

Danniel Lennax's picture

Very Powerful Piece!!!!!

Keep writing,you are very talented.

Danniel

Gabrielle Simmons's picture

WOW! what a lovely poem i really enjoyed reading this it's brightened up my day thank you for writing this its BEAUTIFUL!

Karyn Indursky's picture

This is one of my favorite poems by you. The lines sing themselves and I see you singing this into a microphone on a stage upon your stool strumming a guitar. Great, great piece. I felt myself standing there the whole time and when your time was up I could feel myself applauding you.