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If I'm happy and I'm sad,

If it's night and it's day,

If I'm fine yet I'm mad,

Talk with nothing to say,

Do I laugh, do I cry?

Do I sleep, do I wake?

Do I smile, do I sigh?

What choice do I make?

Got to live my own life

God put me in this world

Got to deal with my own strife

A responsible girl

But don't know how to feel

Want to clear up this mess

Should I drop down and kneel

And do what I do best?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A fictional story of a girl struggling to give up religion under the impression that it's wrong by other people

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:27am
©7 November 2003 - 8:59pm — poeterri
6 February 2006 - 9:11pm — Danniel Lennax (not verified)
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Terri,

I have questioned my faith on more than one occasion.But,the truth is,'I just don't know'.

I do know that our beliefs,no matter what our faith may be,are a way of hope and inspiration to enter our lives and,therefore,the lives of others.

This is another great piece by you,This will also be one of my favorite poems by you.

Danniel

10 November 2003 - 5:47pm — Toni ------ (not verified)
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A good recognition of whats happening all around the world in just a few lines. I like it its powerful. No one should give up their faith

8 November 2003 - 4:29am — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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I like this poem for a few reasons. They are it's inspiring, spirtual, religious, genuine, etc. This is definitely one of my favorite poems by you. Great job. Keep it up.