I paint a picture in my head
A pretty girl all dressed in red
Who danced among the trees so tall
And beckoned birds with her sweet call
Who took her every step with care
And brought to life the spirits there
Who ran easily each mile
And charmed the people with her smile
Who arrived home, all her deeds done
Her glowing cheeks shone like the sun
The story was wrong, misunderstood,
Grandma�s version of Red Riding Hood
cool use of rhyming couplets and i love the suprise ending.
I can't believe I missed this one, too. It's a creative poem with splashes of inspiration. Your imagery is amazing and your rhyming is right on. Great work!
Terri,
I like this one!
I especially liked the choice of words.
Well done.
Danniel
Wow!!! I thought this poem was brilliant. What a twist at the end.