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Can You Remember?

Can you remember?

The night you ran away

Swore that you would never come back

Were gone less than two days



Can you remember?

The night you ran away

Found refuge in an old pig farm

Slept buried in the hay



Can you remember?

The night you ran away

Took the contents of the fridge

Did you expect to live that way?



And can you remember?

The night that you came home

We thought you couldn�t stay away

Only came back for a comb!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I was v. young when I wrote this, that's my excuse.

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©7 September 2003 - 8:36pm — poeterri
3 April 2006 - 2:47pm — Laura Minns (not verified)
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lol very funny terri, again the techs think im a freak, fro laughin at my comp, very well written , keep on truckin cup x

30 November 2005 - 11:36pm — Danniel Lennax (not verified)
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Hello Terri,

I just thought that I would have a look at your work. You are a talanted writer.Very well done on this one. Keep it up.

PS
Thank you for your comments on my work.
I appreciate the feedback.

An UN-MET Friend,
Danniel J. Lennax

10 September 2003 - 7:00pm — Ali Collins (not verified)
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hey terri, i know some people could find this poem to be seriousetc but i found it quite light hearted, like when you said 'only came back for a comb' i couldnt help but laugh out load at that line. well done

ali
xxx

9 September 2003 - 7:24pm — Betty Hattersley (not verified)
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How very clever of you...I liked this poem so much.