Brown is tasting chocolately
Green hides in the bush
It’s blue that makes our skies so clear
Oh how much reds do blush!
Purple’s getting so angry
So don’t stand in her way
Silver coats the stars at night
That run away at day
Black’s the darkest colour known
Grey’s a lighter shade
Pink’s the one that comes along
When red begins to fade
this is very good
the way you go through the colours without changing subject
mine suck theyr all about life death love and loss
its a good poem thought
well done :)
Terri,
Again,a good poem.
I love the way you express the colors in verse.
Very NICE!!!
Danniel
I love this poem so much that I'm going to add it to my webpage. It will be under "Poem By Various Authors" or something to that effect. It's too hard to remember off the top of my head,k but be sure to look for your poem on my site. Thanks!
very clever terri, i can't do poems like that, where its like all related-im so sad that u r so much betta then me :( but im very pleased that u r so talented x
thats so cool and no one had read it so i thought hey lets read it and how many poems have you serisoly done man god 61 wow you have a lot of free time
k bye