Caught in a rainstorm
Water from the sky
God is weeping tears down
Is it time for me to die?
Now the light is seeping through
Shadows on the sea
Rainbows are a forming now
The angels come for me
Caught in a rainfall
Time to wrap up warm
Because it’s not my time to go,
It is just a storm.
beautiful terri, sounds like it could be from one of the poems from the different cultures that miss g forces us to read, but this one is totally enjoyable, it is one your best pieces- i agree with steph :) LaUrA 'tHe GiNgEr' MiNnS
Terri, this is fantastic. In fact it's one of your best pieces. I love the rhythm. How did you come up with something as great as this? Toni's right. It's really nice. From your sister Stephanie xx
I like the twist to this poem. You build up a belief that you're dying and going to a better place. Yet, in the last stanza you get your readers with a surprise ending. I love it.
i think this poems is really nice terri from toni