You And Me - Happy?

The sea and sun

Must make the grass

If blue and yellow

Make green



Do blood and tears

Make purple smears

Or just the hurt that's seen?



When white snow

Comes from the night

Does it make

Our clouds so grey?



Do you and me = happy

In every single way?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I think I could have come up with a better title, but this was written back when I naively thought that it didn't matter what you named a poem, as long as it had some relevance to the subject at hand. But it has to matter, after all, they are what makes you click on it to read it, right? Nevertheless, I try to refrain from changing original material to fit how I feel now, hence the name still remains.

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Laura Minns's picture

gd poem n the title is fine- no ready betweens the lineys lol. very clever, i see that ur artistic side reaches to colour as well as poetry lol. but well done terri. i think that is fab!

Shaketa Copelin's picture

Real creative poem...I enjoyed reading.

Betty Hattersley's picture

Hello how are you doing? I haven't been on here in ages. A happy new year to you all. I loved this poem but then again all your work is good....regards Betty

Faye -'s picture

(You don't know me, but we both enjoy reading Alison's poetry. (Ali Coliins).
I was reading some of her new poems and I spotted your critiques, I hope you don't mind me reading your poems?!!)

-This is one of my favs of yours as it is really clever.
A sweet little rhyme, (I hope that isn't an insult) So well done!

sam's picture

you read this to me in art i didnt know you were putting it on your site i am glad you have it is excellent

Toni ------'s picture

i think this one is really really clever, it'll take me a while to come up with something like that.oh well we can't be all the same at everything.......