I know that you
Are feeling sad
And you know that
I'm feeling bad
Was just one fight
No need to cry
'Cause you're the star
Up in my sky
Meaningless words
Should never mean
We can't be close
Like we've always been
This can't be how you want it to end
Please like me again
My special friend
Terri x
This is a really heartfelt poem and must mean a lot to you I really enjoyed it.....now to be less formal I couldnt really recomend any coz their all a bit dull but The angel and the deamon, The oaisis and possibly This mentallity are ok can you reccomend any for me to read I'd read them all but I'm only home on the weekends =)
hi its shannon agen i like the poem because i like the sound of it and i like the rhyming words luv from shannon kay aged 5
it has a nice flow but at the end when you say "end, again, and friend" it kinda throws it off
good job tho
ash
Much Love
Ashley
I like this one alot, you are definatly getting better.when i get a chance ill recomend you to some people.