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Dear My Friend

I know that you

Are feeling sad

And you know that

I'm feeling bad

Was just one fight

No need to cry

'Cause you're the star

Up in my sky

Meaningless words

Should never mean

We can't be close

Like we've always been

This can't be how you want it to end

Please like me again

My special friend

Terri x

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©8 July 2003 - 8:48pm — poeterri
3 February 2007 - 5:34pm — Whisper . (not verified)
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This is a really heartfelt poem and must mean a lot to you I really enjoyed it.....now to be less formal I couldnt really recomend any coz their all a bit dull but The angel and the deamon, The oaisis and possibly This mentallity are ok can you reccomend any for me to read I'd read them all but I'm only home on the weekends =)

14 July 2003 - 4:53pm — shannon who lives down nicols street agen (not verified)
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hi its shannon agen i like the poem because i like the sound of it and i like the rhyming words luv from shannon kay aged 5

12 July 2003 - 4:19pm — running_with_rabbits
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it has a nice flow but at the end when you say "end, again, and friend" it kinda throws it off

good job tho

ash

Much Love

Ashley

9 July 2003 - 5:54pm — Toni ------ (not verified)
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I like this one alot, you are definatly getting better.when i get a chance ill recomend you to some people.